Thursday, December 12, 2013

Entry 4 Part Two



From the Audio Journal of Niles Dantes

November 19th, 1981

I strove first to communicate with the children. Though efforts at conventional speech continued to be of no avail, I pressed onward, channeling all my thought, all my will, into a single mental command that, soundless though it were, seemed to echo throughout the phantom chamber.

Heed me.

As one, the children turned in my direction, alarm and confusion spreading across their faces at the voice that seemed to have come from nowhere. Indeed, even as they gazed toward me, their eyes remained unseeing, darting back and forth uncertainly. Was I invisible, then? Present in some physical capacity that remained shrouded to the inhabitants of this strange realm of my own making? Or was I a spirit disembodied, set adrift by some higher power or incomprehensible wrinkle of fate? My inability to move implied the latter.

Regardless of the nature of my state or its cause, the children could not see the source of the voice they had clearly all heard. As mass panic threatened to set in among them, I ‘spoke’ once more, attempting to shift my thoughts into a softer tone as I asked that they remain calm.

Their nervous murmurings and wavering glances only intensified at this. A few of the children began crying. When I restated my desire for them to be at ease, hysteria finally erupted, as all of the children began screaming and frantically running this way and that, some huddling into corners, others fleeing from the room or otherwise passing beyond my still static field of view.

All save one.

An auburn-haired girl of perhaps nine held her ground, her fear clearly matched by resolve tinged with curiosity.

“Please, whoever you are, whatever you are, don’t hurt us”, she whispered, still glancing about in a vain attempt to see me.

I shan’t harm you, child. I merely wish to speak with you, to gain understanding. I am…new…here and unsure of a great many things.

“Who…who are you?”

My name is Niles Dantes, and I…

Our conversation was interrupted as the screaming of the others intensified. Between the noise and continued unease caused by my disembodied state, it was becoming increasingly difficult to muster the level of concentration needed to continue speaking in this unorthodox fashion. I must confess that I am generally not a very patient man, and here my frustration finally boiled over. I issued another command at the entire room, inadvertently willing the children into a single state, the potency of my thoughts strengthened by my anger.

Be still!

And still they were. Every last individual in that room was suddenly deathly quiet, frozen in place without so much as a blinking eyelid or quivering muscle to be seen. To my horror, they remained that way, petrified, their unaltered appearances the only thing distinguishing them from the hapless victims of a Gorgon. Even the brave girl I was conversing with was so inflicted, her head imprisoned in a slight tilt begun by her curiosity and preserved by my own foolishness.

I had only meant to tell the children to be still, not force this terrible state upon them! I frantically began attempting to issue thoughts reversing the affliction, yet my mind was drained, hollow, devoid of the energy needed to issue a command of sufficient strength.

Even as I stared into the frozen blue eyes of the poor child I had been speaking to, she and rest of the surrounding world were gone. Physical sensation was restored, and I found myself slumped on the couch of my apartment, exactly as I had planned before.

I had returned.

Note from the author: I apologize for the long delay since the previous post. I was suffering from an infuriating case of writer's block. For the final few entries of the narrative, I have decided to alter the format of user feedback in order to give you, the audience, greater influence. Rather than offer a binary choice, I instead pose a question: The little girl that spoke to Dantes in this entry will become a recurring character for the rest of the story. Given that she is essentially a tabula rasa within the context of the narrative, what kind of personality traits would you like her to develop? What should her name be? I will attempt to incorporate as many responses as possible into future entries.